Wednesday, 28 September 2011

another magpie

 while the rain
cascades cold and salt
we wait
there
a light
the smallest blink
a candle gutter
 tells us you are near
our journey
over centuries to this place
concludes.



my first effort for Magpie Tales, this picture just inspires

8 comments:

  1. May I compliment you on your drawing? It's an interesting way to spur creative writing.

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  2. Your Magpie inspires all of us ....

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  3. Very nicely done, I enjoyed this a lot!

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  4. Nicely done word imagery ... our journey over centuries... loved that. And I also loved your sketch! How fun to show the page your ideas were born on.

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  5. thank you so much for all your lovely comments, a lovely way to start the day!!! xxx

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  6. well this was a great first start :)

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  7. I agree - a fine first write for the Magpie.

    Anna :o]

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  8. Indeed, it's a very fine start. I like how you turn around the words and bring them to different place/meaning. Finishing with a verb is Clever.

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