while the rain
cascades cold and salt
we wait
there
a light
the smallest blink
a candle gutter
tells us you are near
our journey
over centuries to this place
concludes.
my first effort for Magpie Tales, this picture just inspires
May I compliment you on your drawing? It's an interesting way to spur creative writing.
ReplyDeleteYour Magpie inspires all of us ....
ReplyDeleteVery nicely done, I enjoyed this a lot!
ReplyDeleteNicely done word imagery ... our journey over centuries... loved that. And I also loved your sketch! How fun to show the page your ideas were born on.
ReplyDeletethank you so much for all your lovely comments, a lovely way to start the day!!! xxx
ReplyDeletewell this was a great first start :)
ReplyDeleteI agree - a fine first write for the Magpie.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Indeed, it's a very fine start. I like how you turn around the words and bring them to different place/meaning. Finishing with a verb is Clever.
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