Sunday 18 March 2012
Learn and repeat
image: Robert and Shana ParkeHarrison
i fold back and turn turn turn
the vision that's burnt burnt burnt
i work and repeat repeat repeat
the lessons not learnt learnt learnt
the cogs in my life life life
continue to grind grind grind
and my heavy heart heaves heaves heaves
while the tasks never end end end
as we circle and weave weave weave
keep oiling the steel steel steel
and cranking the wheel wheel wheel
for onward i go go go
for my life's never slow slow slow.
18 march 2012
With thanks to Tess and her prompt photo for The Mag, go and see what the others made of this extraordinary picture.
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Great use of repitition here.
ReplyDeleteThis is awesome.. And i am reaing it silently but with rhythm in my mind... :-)
ReplyDeleteJJRod'z
hahaha nicely done done done
ReplyDeleteon the repetition tion tion
smiles....
life def never slows....
excellent excellent excellent
ReplyDeleteNice musicality, as spoken word should be...
ReplyDeleteGreat device with that three word repetition thing.
ReplyDeleteIt really worked.
=)
The repition hits the point home. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThe repetition really does it on this one, nicely done! :-)
ReplyDeleteI like how the repetition echos the title...nice...
ReplyDeleteYes, yes, yes ... the repetition works well!
ReplyDeletei love how you have all entered into the rhythmic feel of the poem with your comments!!! thank you!
ReplyDeleteIt is funny but we get so comfortable doing the same things over and over, hoping for a different outcome. I like this a lot!
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