Monday, 3 December 2012

iris blue


time ticks on
while i struggle to keep up
iris blue and pine
scent the air


Object to be Destroyed by Man Ray




go to The Mag for more and probably longer offerings!!

8 comments:

  1. Time ticks on, doesn't wait for us to slow down and enjoy! Yes, smell the pine, admire the blue iris! :)

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  2. Nothing about your poem suggests it needs to be longer ~~~ I love it just the way it is.

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  3. thank you so much for your comments...i feel a bit like the white rabbit in alice at the moment...!!! tick tock!!

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  4. Yes, I can relate to those lovely words! Love Linda x

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