Monday, 3 December 2012

iris blue

time ticks on
while i struggle to keep up
iris blue and pine
scent the air

Object to be Destroyed by Man Ray

go to The Mag for more and probably longer offerings!!


  1. Time ticks on, doesn't wait for us to slow down and enjoy! Yes, smell the pine, admire the blue iris! :)

  2. Nothing about your poem suggests it needs to be longer ~~~ I love it just the way it is.

  3. thank you so much for your comments...i feel a bit like the white rabbit in alice at the moment...!!! tick tock!!

  4. Yes, I can relate to those lovely words! Love Linda x


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