Monday, 3 December 2012

iris blue


time ticks on
while i struggle to keep up
iris blue and pine
scent the air


Object to be Destroyed by Man Ray




go to The Mag for more and probably longer offerings!!

8 comments:

Margaret said...

Time ticks on, doesn't wait for us to slow down and enjoy! Yes, smell the pine, admire the blue iris! :)

Helen said...

Nothing about your poem suggests it needs to be longer ~~~ I love it just the way it is.

Tess Kincaid said...

Iris blue and pine...sigh...

Kay said...

thank you so much for your comments...i feel a bit like the white rabbit in alice at the moment...!!! tick tock!!

Emma Major said...

Simple and elegant

Lyn said...

Lyrical and lovely!

flowers on my table said...

Yes, I can relate to those lovely words! Love Linda x

Carrie Burtt said...

Sigh.....this is lovely! :-)