Monday 3 December 2012

iris blue


time ticks on
while i struggle to keep up
iris blue and pine
scent the air


Object to be Destroyed by Man Ray


go to The Mag for more and probably longer offerings!!
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8 comments:

  1. Margaret3 December 2012 at 09:27

    Time ticks on, doesn't wait for us to slow down and enjoy! Yes, smell the pine, admire the blue iris! :)

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  2. Helen3 December 2012 at 09:48

    Nothing about your poem suggests it needs to be longer ~~~ I love it just the way it is.

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  3. Tess Kincaid3 December 2012 at 11:02

    Iris blue and pine...sigh...

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  4. Kay3 December 2012 at 12:09

    thank you so much for your comments...i feel a bit like the white rabbit in alice at the moment...!!! tick tock!!

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  5. LLM Calling3 December 2012 at 12:41

    Simple and elegant

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  6. Lyn3 December 2012 at 14:22

    Lyrical and lovely!

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  7. flowers on my table4 December 2012 at 05:20

    Yes, I can relate to those lovely words! Love Linda x

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  8. Carrie Van Horn4 December 2012 at 11:56

    Sigh.....this is lovely! :-)

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