tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8474673950923027170.post9206849822222359024..comments2023-04-17T05:07:50.919-07:00Comments on IS THIS THE RIGHT PATH?: Canteen RomanceKayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16584116146098939783noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8474673950923027170.post-37938597137855929222011-12-07T23:31:28.516-08:002011-12-07T23:31:28.516-08:00"...a tear
caught with my tongue
my only su..."...a tear <br />caught with my tongue <br />my only sustenance..." Beautiful.Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13494219959077922220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8474673950923027170.post-875329513029888962011-12-07T13:59:41.429-08:002011-12-07T13:59:41.429-08:00Sad!Sad!Trellissimohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02283663872471564907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8474673950923027170.post-77430847948723168852011-12-07T09:01:14.527-08:002011-12-07T09:01:14.527-08:00thank you, thank you , thank you for all your wond...thank you, thank you , thank you for all your wonderful comments...it means so much...xx kayKayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16584116146098939783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8474673950923027170.post-84286924644908900082011-12-07T08:35:57.969-08:002011-12-07T08:35:57.969-08:00Oh, you hit it out of the ballpark with this one! ...Oh, you hit it out of the ballpark with this one! <br /><br />...I am the pitied<br />the next door nudge...<br /><br />Wow.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8474673950923027170.post-18205984123157608102011-12-07T01:32:23.217-08:002011-12-07T01:32:23.217-08:00Ouch unfortunatley for me I felt like that once wh...Ouch unfortunatley for me I felt like that once when I was very young tender...you have captured this brilliantly...<br />Please send me your address xxxxx<br />Hugs Lynn xxxxSea Angelshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17465151079231928631noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8474673950923027170.post-85297887126604722172011-12-06T05:22:32.438-08:002011-12-06T05:22:32.438-08:00You did the loneliness of this so well..You did the loneliness of this so well..Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8474673950923027170.post-59535847544155570022011-12-05T16:07:44.254-08:002011-12-05T16:07:44.254-08:00Surely each one caught in his own prison. Nicely d...Surely each one caught in his own prison. Nicely done!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8474673950923027170.post-67414463229958169172011-12-05T16:01:16.345-08:002011-12-05T16:01:16.345-08:00a tear caught with my tongue my only sustenance......a tear caught with my tongue my only sustenance...nice emotion in that ...great flow and love that last stanzaBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8474673950923027170.post-68568237124121818962011-12-05T06:41:08.230-08:002011-12-05T06:41:08.230-08:00You made one trickling tear come to life ... well ...You made one trickling tear come to life ... well done!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8474673950923027170.post-51106377166118115572011-12-05T05:35:09.057-08:002011-12-05T05:35:09.057-08:00Wonderful lines here... Love it!
JJRod'zWonderful lines here... Love it!<br /><br />JJRod'zJJ Roa Rodriguezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501127870785148555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8474673950923027170.post-1950839990370115412011-12-05T03:13:24.438-08:002011-12-05T03:13:24.438-08:00Very true, quite impersonal setting!Very true, quite impersonal setting!izzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06379007428464069723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8474673950923027170.post-51770938631235930212011-12-04T22:10:50.523-08:002011-12-04T22:10:50.523-08:00loneliness in a crowd - perfectly capturedloneliness in a crowd - perfectly capturedIsabel Doylehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17974989548030799086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8474673950923027170.post-67693081304851287812011-12-04T14:42:53.893-08:002011-12-04T14:42:53.893-08:00I love the line
The next door nudge
Thank you Ka...I love the line<br /><br />The next door nudge<br /><br />Thank you Kay for another haunting and thought provoking piece. xxxGeorgie Steedshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04796661049199812710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8474673950923027170.post-1792891401577594912011-12-04T11:57:47.544-08:002011-12-04T11:57:47.544-08:00You have captured the mood of this piece so well.You have captured the mood of this piece so well.Marilyn & Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00851884880790561276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8474673950923027170.post-66232761007717822192011-12-04T10:53:13.934-08:002011-12-04T10:53:13.934-08:00i am the pitied
the next door nudge
all eyes are ...i am the pitied<br />the next door nudge<br />all eyes are cast down<br />with knowledge ignored.<br /><br />one of my favorite today so far.<br />poetic, beautiful, and striking imagery.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8474673950923027170.post-47069106951250104672011-12-04T10:42:27.853-08:002011-12-04T10:42:27.853-08:00This felt very isolating and sad to me too. I lik...This felt very isolating and sad to me too. I like what you wrote--it's heartbreaking...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8474673950923027170.post-20428921715802270552011-12-04T10:37:32.358-08:002011-12-04T10:37:32.358-08:00You have indeed caught the isolation at least of t...You have indeed caught the isolation at least of those who would rather not be.christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.com