Nice write, good imagery.
I'm glad she released it ....
Imaginative, clever, innovative - well done.
I swear that I can hear those wings!
The third stanza really stands out as I can see much in the words...Will your eyes illuminate my path? A lovely line to start the stanza. This really is a lovely poem full of imagery.
'...eat my spent breath' - lovely!Anna :o]
...ah yes, she lives to see another day!
Beautiful...I like a happy ending...
Nice fairy tale!
I really enjoyed your take thanks!
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