Perhaps you may need release from demons. An intriguing tale fraught with hints of mystery.
A real sense of loss and longing.
Thoughts of better things to come. DelightfulVisit Keith's Ramblings!
In your warm interiority , seems he can never grow old
In a word, intriguing...
Melancholy but nicely written. You've got some nice language in here. :-)
My first visit here (I do not get the time I would like to have to blog and read others) and it will not be my last. I truly love where you took this, where it took me....
That is such a beauty... "while we stay lost.....restrained and slowawaiting our release." Loved it!We are lost in a world still away from our ultimate goal. Good Work!
Losing someone close beautifully described.
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