Sunday, 18 March 2012

Learn and repeat


image: Robert and Shana ParkeHarrison


i fold back and turn turn turn
the vision that's burnt burnt burnt
i work and repeat  repeat repeat
the lessons not learnt learnt learnt
the cogs in my life life life 
continue to grind grind grind
and my heavy heart heaves heaves heaves
while the tasks never end end end
as we circle and weave weave weave
keep oiling the steel steel steel
and cranking the wheel wheel wheel
for onward i go go go
for my life's never slow slow slow.


18 march 2012
With thanks to Tess and her prompt photo for The Mag, go and see what the others made of this extraordinary picture. 

12 comments:

  1. This is awesome.. And i am reaing it silently but with rhythm in my mind... :-)

    JJRod'z

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  2. hahaha nicely done done done
    on the repetition tion tion
    smiles....

    life def never slows....

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  3. excellent excellent excellent

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  4. Nice musicality, as spoken word should be...

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  5. Great device with that three word repetition thing.
    It really worked.

    =)

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  6. The repition hits the point home. Well done!

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  7. The repetition really does it on this one, nicely done! :-)

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  8. I like how the repetition echos the title...nice...

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  9. Yes, yes, yes ... the repetition works well!

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  10. i love how you have all entered into the rhythmic feel of the poem with your comments!!! thank you!

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  11. It is funny but we get so comfortable doing the same things over and over, hoping for a different outcome. I like this a lot!

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