Sunday, 19 May 2013

Your thousand seeds





lighthouse dandelions by Jamie Wyeth



blow
oh nodding heads
your thousand seeds
cast on the sultry
wind of time
yellows clash
a field turns
butter to silk
windmills turn slowly
tick
tock
we grind down
hard
and then watch
the evening light
and glow worms
shiver
admist  fairy dust
which flies by
and we catch wishes
as if they mattered
we are wrapped in the darkening clouds
drifting
entwined
the flash of light now
holds  us
as we dance close
strobe light
bends our moves
into people we no longer recognize.

KD/May 2013

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10 comments:

  1. The pace and movement here. Enjoyed.

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  2. Thanks for commenting to my entry. Reread yours and appreciate it even more. Now it's the sounds and mood. Thank you again.

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  3. I enjoyed the flow of this piece and the following was my favorite part.

    admist fairy dust
    which flies by
    and we catch wishes

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  4. More Mushroom than blow here, Quixote , thanks, i enjoy very much !

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  5. A great other-worldly feel you created to match this picture. Well done.

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  6. Agreed ... the flow of this piece from one image to another through time ... what a wonderful mind movie ...

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  7. This may be my favorite this week. It really suits the image.

    =)

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  8. Wow this is incredible and though it has been said I love the ambiance and flow of the piece =)

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  9. This really dances...moves like a dream..I'm floating...

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  10. ...the end feels so sad but i think you had this prompt written perfectly... smiles. .

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